In Quiet Submission Comments

The narrative of this is excellent, supported by a well constructed framework. The flow is wonderfuland thelanguage - the opening line is truly imaginative - is used to strong effect. There seems to be a religious feel to this; reverentual. The feeling from the opening line onwards is one of reliving: some might think it a rebirth; a rejection of a set of ideas yet without replacement. The second line is a stunner; here the narrative seems to be saying thatissues of peace are wrong or at least the gestures towards peace are wrong. Whatever, this is a strong poem Lawrence. I enjoyed it a lot.

Nick, I so appreciate your comments! I thank you! Best wishes... L