It is cold
I am unable to hold
Myself from seeking warmth
I seek for the woolen clothes
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What a comforting poem that has warmed my heart. Congrats on being selected....
Yes, keeping pace with the season makes one comfortable. That is the reality, as far as nature is concerned. Beautiful write in every sense. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X
You capture the desolation of the season well, the power of its brooding presence always lurks, while it is one of my favorite seasons, I see it through our eyes, its merciless sadness. Wonderful poem!
I really liked your poem, it has certainly got me thinking of something I've never given thought too. It's hardly surprising it was chosen as poem of the day. Well done!
I can only seek comfort by keeping pace with season I stand by the gas oven with one reason To be in my comfort zone I smile to stand alone. - - - - - - - - A lovely poem- - - - Your idea to keep near the gas stove to keep peace with the season is really wonderful.Congratulations for the poem selected as Poem of the Day.
Winter! Nature is here to take its course... Can one change the season? Truly I wish I could lengthen the summer!
warmth? it is what we all seek? a well written poem of some of the ways to find it.
Ace, race! To embrace life. Keeping pace with the season. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Beautiful poem nicely brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Rimni.
A beautiful poem Rimni. Congratulations on being member of the day. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Very practical....congratulations on poet of the day- 10++++
Yeah it is the reality of winter. Though one tries much one can't escape the cold totally. A very nice poem with a nice flow. Congrats on being selected as the poem of the day.
To feel the warmth Of the hot sun On a cold day Congrats on Poem Of The Day!
Congratulations Rimni......for your poem being selected as the poem of the day....
I can only seek comfort by keeping pace with season I stand by the gas oven with one reason To be in my comfort zone I smile to stand alone. to be in my comfort zone, in the warmth..... nice poem.....those who have experienced winter in cold countries will understand this poem very well. thank you dear poet. tony
I can lament of no use Coz the chill is sure to last and this is true Can one change the season It will play though you have many a reason To go for a change You cannot for long or short range The bet lines of the poem. Keep writing.
when winter is there, can summer remain far behind.......nice lines by you..
Nature is there to take its course..a realization of the limits of man. We can all relate to the uncomfortable feeling that cold causes. A good read.
To be in harmony with nature's manifestations and seasonal changes therein is secret of maintaining one's comfort zone. Great poem. Congrats on its poem of the Day.