Wednesday, April 2, 2008

! In Pursuit Of The Dream Comments

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If I could just reach out and grab
That elusive dream of all I seek
Yet with each grasp I cannot hold
It long enough to truly know
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Linda Ori
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 November 2008

THinki have a new name for you, Linda....Mellifluously Metreing Midnight! Can't believe i missed this diamond-chip penning.... Awesome closing stanza... and of course....structure-smoooooooth! You Do Rock, Midnight Blondie! Frankie J./FjR

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 14 May 2008

Dream until the morning light..............sometimes only dreams light us up with the unfinished wish..............nice poem

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Coach Roth 16 April 2008

Your words capture the 'dreams' we have and how we experience them...sometimes so painful and yet not true...sometimes so true and hopefully not painful...nice write...Coach

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unknown Viper 02 April 2008

beautiful poem! .....

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