Sunday, April 26, 2009

In Pursuit Of Happiness Comments

Rating: 4.9

In the pursuit of happiness, ..
I have crossed many bridges…
Climbed many mountains
& traveled many roads;
...
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Romeo Della Valle
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Vidya-Murali 29 May 2020

Beautiful lines about life

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Cheryl Tutaan 09 May 2017

Truly, I was relieved by your inspiring words...Thank you so much, Sir...+++++10

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Melissa Patty 25 May 2016

This poem has such a beautiful message really touched me , much deserved 10!

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Amitava Sur 29 July 2014

A poignant write with a lovely realization that there may be some failures in the passage but that is not the end. Thank you Romeo, Keep well my friend

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Captain Cur 09 May 2012

Great ending, where the end becomes the beginning. Lovely poem, fluid and meaningful.

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 04 March 2012

Its nice....lucky you romeo....lucky you. Nice poem....+

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Hum Riyaz™ 17 January 2012

Very touching. Could say that it spoke to my soul :)

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Kyle Youngblood 20 September 2011

A brighter side of pain, life's problems, and sufferings...10/10 Great poem!

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Alex Kenneh 04 August 2011

Yes, I do see it. I appreciate this.

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Double A P 28 June 2011

In Pursuit of Happiness is a very truthful poem anybody can relate too, telling the truth about life is very beautifull aswell as inspiring, showing us that when we are down we always can get back up. Very well done 10/10.

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Hans Vr 22 April 2011

Very good poem. The rythm is great and the content is inspiring. In pursuit of happiness, all of us are. I have come to realise that happiness lies not at the end but along the way. It lies not in great achievements but in small ransom kind acts.

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Danielle Elsworth 12 August 2010

I absolutely love this poem bucause I relate to it so well even though i am young i have went through alot of sad ending then great new beginnings. :)

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Ronn Michael Salinas 22 December 2009

Silver linings. Aww.

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 01 November 2009

Hi Romeo. This poem truely is realistic, but you described it in a beautiful way, you wrote the truth by your imagination to make this poem. Nicely composed.

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Justin Unanue 14 October 2009

This poem's journey, and the readers journey, and the writers journey, makes it all seem worth it. Which makes me smile. Thanks for that.

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Mohammed Hassan 06 October 2009

it's an optimistic poem thank you I know what you are pointing to

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James Mclain 20 August 2009

and as such it seems to me.. the heavans bleed.. in the Pursuit Of Happiness.. for all to see...iip

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Noor Siti Fatimah 15 August 2009

great poem indeed with gd sense of meaning...10+..=)

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Zachary Clark 11 May 2009

Hope is a gift which not all of us are awareof as it's apart of daily reality thanks for the poem.

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