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This is a delight poem that causes me to pause and think what if. The rhymes are in couplets, as opposed to free verse, but that doesn't matter. It's worth reading over and over!

An insightful philosophical piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth in good rhyme scheme with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Robert.

To be human beings without the race? For all the striving takes us away, From all we have - our present day..........................A thoughtful poem.