In Puerto Rico Comments

that's a lovely piece indeed...well woven in to a poetic mattress of love..a comfortable double layer one I mean....makes me feel so at ease..thanks 10+++

beautiful lines wonderful poem

Purity and passion combined, your style is so unique in language and expression and imagery, Elaine.I feel as if transported to Puerto Rico :) Thank you. Best wishes. A.

the waves building up the tempo of love..resonant imagery,10+

So much colour used in this beautiful blend of words and scene.....like glitter falling down the page my friend....brilliant job 10+

A beautiful panorama of love and nature sprinkled in Puerto Rico. Very well written, Elaine.........10/10. Best Wishes Naseer

lovely poem. very peaceful,10

Serene and Sensuous at the same time. While reading this poem i felt as if i was transported to another place. I like the imagery used to describe the surroundings; the way you said so much with so little words.

EXcellent I really love the flow there this was beautiful reading Great 10+ poem keep it up

very sensible sensuous poem.explicit are the emotions especially at the end when there are moving......

When love is care is there...................true affection is also there............10+++.....