Tuesday, October 25, 2005

In Pscyhe With Divinity Comments

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i like the silence at the lake
as little insects dance
plunging their little legs
every now and then
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john tiong chunghoo
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Shelley B. Keats 25 October 2005

beautifully written!

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Raynette Eitel 25 October 2005

Very nice, John. Check the use of the word 'little.' Perhaps you could find some other words so you don't use too many in one poem. Just a thought. Raynette

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Marcy Jarvis 25 October 2005

another gem, John. I love this...

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Uriah Hamilton 25 October 2005

Once again, you share your spiritual self, thanks.

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Mary Nagy 25 October 2005

I really enjoyed the image here John. Beautiful. Sincerely, Mary

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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