In Praise Of Woman Part Two Comments

The repetitive Interspersing of nominative with participle phrases produces a rhythmic, swaying motion to this piece which perfectly reflects the concept of appreciating the feminine movements of a woman, and directly reinforces the author's comparison of woman to poetry. Deft craftsmanship there. Perhaps we shalll have a Part 3 to this series, though, where Mr. Billsborough delves beyond the physical attributes of a woman to the truly mysterious and supremely confusing inner workings. But that might be more like post-modern abstract poetry that makes sense only to the author. :) Warmest regards from a fan of your poetry in particular, and women in general.