Sunday, December 31, 2017

In Praise Of Slow Chemistry Comments

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in praise of slow chemistry: a love poem

last night a steel rain suddenly threw
itself at my garden in mocking
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GORDON GILHULY
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Bri Edwards 10 January 2018

do you want the 2nd steel on the same line? ? ......steel is not a virtue steel though i have speeded/sped through the poem, i like it. i don't care much for 'love poems' typically. yeah, speeded is a bit incorrectly spelled, if ya know what i mean. :) in a hurry now. maybe i'll come back to read another. bri :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 December 2017

Gordon, such a lovely write...10+++

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Gordon Gilhuly 01 January 2018

Thank you, Bernard, you are most kind. Happy New Year!

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