Give me not
Your nubile girls
Experts on the course of life,
Whose baby cheeks
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Many a tired woman would read this and smile David. You would make a woman who has forgotten the beauty of her youth and not yet recognized the beauty in her age feel wanted again. Beautiful David
Speaking as an older woman let me say bravo a man[ as we say in Ireland ] who knows his onions. The poem is delightful also well done
I don't know what I most admire- your good taste in poetry or your good taste in women!
David, you are a rascal. I hope you haven't been exploiting these older women of whom you speak so eloquently. (At least, not wiithout me) Have a look at the lady in my profile. I found her when she was 70. So I know of what you speak, and it's all good. lol
Brilliant work and masterfully written, content and flow excellent.
You so beautifully put moments of life to words. You are a master poet! xox