Saturday, October 18, 2008

In Pain Comments

Rating: 2.9

My heart hurts with chest curdling pain of no doors..
My thoughts silently scream for these tears in me to stop with their pours...
My fingertips stuck to the keys that spell out your name...
My eyes uncomfortably sown closed allowing no light, not even a grain...
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I love you truly
COMMENTS
Shane Clawson 10 December 2011

really in depth from a good approach. Good job

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Aahil Aahil 27 September 2009

Nice poem well written

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Stephanie Saba 25 October 2008

Aww! So young, yet can write beautiful poetry! love it! :)

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R T 24 October 2008

I love you Babe.Thats all i can comprehend

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Serenity Prayer 23 October 2008

i felt like this too, then i finally accepted what i was rejecting and now im happy again. im not saying that youre in the same situation i was, im just saying that thats what this poem reminds me of. great job.

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yong poet thats great nice poem

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Reina Lorenzo 18 October 2008

all i can say is, i can relate to this.. sigh... nive piece..

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