In, Out, And In-Between Comments
When I enter the flat
All the lights are turned off
And the darkness so thick
It would close in on me
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Perfect image - darkness like water, diving in and swimming in! Love this!
Loved this. Full of great imagery and very atmospheric. Hugs Anna xxx
Another excellent poem. It has a dreamlike quality that enables the reader to feel that sense of swimming in darkness feeling for familiar objects and the way out.
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7/18/2025 3:57:54 PM # 1.0.0
Beautiful, almost filmic. Great poem, Julia! ! Jon xxx