Thursday, August 20, 2009

In & Out Comments

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You came in, unwanted and new.
You came in, surprised you too.
You came in, too late for us.
You came in, thought it was lust.
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Brooke Peterson
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Sanober Khan 20 October 2009

wow awesome work! ! very creative piece, and very well written!

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Christine Schmidt 02 October 2009

Do tell. Very sassy. I can feel the frustration. I like how you pen feelings into words!

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