Tuesday, March 10, 2009

In Our Own Hands Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why pray to God for providence
then shut our eyes to our neighbour's needs?
Why pray 'Lord shelter the homeless'
then shut our door against the stranger?
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Michael Nkwocha
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Maria Barbara Korynt 02 May 2009

Interesting topic, questions, attempt of the response (?) . The man got a lot of gifts from God and 'free will', like with them to dispose. Free but only inasmuch as all commandments and laws propagated by the church allow (religions) in accordance with these commandments. Whether the man properly is using one's 'gifts'? . Not. Reality shows that we are diverging from principles which the Almighty propagated. Wars, robberies, a corruption and everything what is damaging are attesting to it czlowiekowi. But the man just led it to the situation, that we are shutting up before ourselves and everyone is searching our own crumb of happiness. A callousness is a general occurrence - illness of the civilization. And what with the ones which believe in nothing? It is a distinct topic and certainly other look. I read avidly and with pleasure. (10v.) Greetings :) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Janell Cressman 29 April 2009

once again you stun me with your amazing poetry! ! ! ! ! !

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Rosalita Fernandez 25 March 2009

Amazingly well written, very true and so powerful,10 and added to my favourites!

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Leslie Ching 22 March 2009

powerful...full of purpose and important questions that we often blind ourselves to...a 10

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Bertrina Shorter 18 March 2009

thats a 10! I love this poem totally

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Julia Pascual 10 March 2009

nice piece... it shows reality... great job...

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