Sunday, October 14, 2018

In Our Midst Comments

Rating: 4.8

Your body runs its course
It lies under the trees
And lush green grass
Your voice and laughter
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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Nabakishore Dash 30 March 2022

Perhaps it is written in the memory of a good friend gone.Very nice poem

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David Wood 19 January 2021

Absolutely beautiful.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 January 2021

we are spirits in the material world. Our physical bodies are only a vessel

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Kevin Patrick 18 January 2021

I recently lost a family member reading this poem, raises a lot of feelings similar to the message in this poem. A Truly heartfelt poem it encapsulates the best of humanity

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Anjandev Roy 22 September 2019

You are gone/ But your spirit stands.......fabulous piece. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2018

Your body runs its course It lies under the trees And lush green grass Your voice and laughter Are carried by the wind You are gone But your spirit stands.......much effective lines for a nice beginning. A beautiful poem on remembrance nicely delineated. Thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Navarre 20 November 2018

Ever such beautiful heart! .. With ever such beautifully moving sentiments! .. Beautifully and powerfully expressed! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 October 2018

Your voice and laughter! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 October 2018

On this beautiful day / You are in the core of our hearts / In the recesses of our minds / No matter / What we do / Where we at /What we are.- - so touching and true. A beautiful on remembrance nicely executed.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 October 2018

Remembering a loved one with such a sweet poem is really praiseworthy. Beautiful poem.Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 17 October 2018

Remembrance of a gone loved remains in the core of our hearts and in the recesses of our minds. A great poem.

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Kostas Lagos 17 October 2018

As long as we remember them, our loved ones are always with us. Even death can't keep them away. Thanks R.M.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 October 2018

You are in our midst In times of happiness In times of sadness When we reap The fruits of your plants When we set up the karaoke For us to sing......so touching and impressive. This is really a beautiful poem on remembrance with nice penmanship. Thanks for sharing.10

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M Asim Nehal 15 October 2018

Wonderful poem on remembrance, On some special occasions, people who are close to us, we miss them and remember them although they may not be with us physically but we carry them in our heart and recall them through our memory chip. A fantastic poem 10++++++++

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 October 2018

Such a heartwarming poem, Ate Rose.....10++++++++++++++++++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 October 2018

You are gone Yet you are with us......lovely memory! A beautiful poem is shared....10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

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