Your body runs its course
It lies under the trees
And lush green grass
Your voice and laughter
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we are spirits in the material world. Our physical bodies are only a vessel
I recently lost a family member reading this poem, raises a lot of feelings similar to the message in this poem. A Truly heartfelt poem it encapsulates the best of humanity
You are gone/ But your spirit stands.......fabulous piece. Thank u, dear poetess. anjandev roy.
Your body runs its course It lies under the trees And lush green grass Your voice and laughter Are carried by the wind You are gone But your spirit stands.......much effective lines for a nice beginning. A beautiful poem on remembrance nicely delineated. Thanks for sharing.
Ever such beautiful heart! .. With ever such beautifully moving sentiments! .. Beautifully and powerfully expressed! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
Your voice and laughter! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
On this beautiful day / You are in the core of our hearts / In the recesses of our minds / No matter / What we do / Where we at /What we are.- - so touching and true. A beautiful on remembrance nicely executed.10
Remembering a loved one with such a sweet poem is really praiseworthy. Beautiful poem.Thanks for sharing.
Remembrance of a gone loved remains in the core of our hearts and in the recesses of our minds. A great poem.
As long as we remember them, our loved ones are always with us. Even death can't keep them away. Thanks R.M.
You are in our midst In times of happiness In times of sadness When we reap The fruits of your plants When we set up the karaoke For us to sing......so touching and impressive. This is really a beautiful poem on remembrance with nice penmanship. Thanks for sharing.10
Wonderful poem on remembrance, On some special occasions, people who are close to us, we miss them and remember them although they may not be with us physically but we carry them in our heart and recall them through our memory chip. A fantastic poem 10++++++++
Such a heartwarming poem, Ate Rose.....10++++++++++++++++++
You are gone Yet you are with us......lovely memory! A beautiful poem is shared....10
Perhaps it is written in the memory of a good friend gone.Very nice poem