Friday, March 30, 2012

In Our Existance Comments

Rating: 5.0

We tasted the salt of our tears
saw the light when the birds craft the nest
saw the wind sweep the leave when June
is shivering in winter.
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Makhosonke Dhlamini
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Persian Khushi 04 January 2013

Magnificent writing. Thank you for inviting me to read your work. You are most talented.

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Unwritten Soul 19 December 2012

A quality of work, you have strong mind to save as your own philosophy. Good write_Soul

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Benmosi Gomina 23 August 2012

Now I see what you mean. Nice work. I see we share the same concept of philosophy. More ink to your quill.

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Hans Vr 10 April 2012

I agree with Ernest an Siya very much. this is fantastic poetry. Well done, Makhosonke.

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Ernest Makuakua 01 April 2012

It gives me pleasure joy and motivation to read such work. It gives me what i personally call inteligence inspiration. For these words move in reality. It is powerful and wonderful

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 30 March 2012

Absolutely brilliant, it rained yesterday, even in the house of a women they called a witch, it rained...ngiyifunde more than 3 times already, superb stuff..lmpilo yethu inje.

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