In Orbit Around Your Beating Heart Comments

Oh, what a vast sea we wade into when we take up our pen with love on our mind. The world probably could be papered with odes to love and romance, but you have acquitted yourself well and distinctly with this effort. You have skirted on the edge of well-worn truisms, but greatly succeeded in bringing a fresh edge to each of your metaphors, personalizing and re-working them into a composition that is refreshing and engaging. Bravo!