Monday, December 10, 2012

In Obscurity Comments

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If you sharpen your finest weapon
And attempt to penetrate my soul
It will be like swinging a blade
Through the elusive morning fog
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Jose Chavez
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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 10 December 2012

its well written.. imaginative.. power of love.. i liked it, , ,

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Musfiq Us Shaleheen 10 December 2012

very nice poem... powering of love.. imaginative.. i liked your writing style...

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