In Nature's Bosom Comments

And then I started thinking where is my place, in the nature's blossomms? I saw myself everywhere stealing the nature's grace.

Simply phenomenal write.....Valsa......when you compose on Nature, Nature becomes vibrant and forever lively..... wonderful piece as usual....10/10

Simply phenomenal write.....Valsa......when you compose on Nature, Nature becomes vibrant and forever lively..... wonderful piece as usual

a beautiful poem nice imagery. a good read

Had I been a Raphael or Rembrandt I would have transferred those scenes onto a canvas Which one would never get tired of gazing at And kept in the drawing room for everyone to see I also feel frustrated for not being able to share the beauty that nature reveals to eyes with a brush, in colors. But you have done it pretty well with a pen, in words, before my eyes have more than a beautiful original paint, thank you!

You are an accurate observer of the things going on in hilly terrains. No poet of the past or present can surpass you in this art. You stroll and watch all these avian calls, jumping squirrels, flirting butterflies and so on. Beautiful lines pleasing to ears and eyes.

I live out in the country and sometimes goes on long walks. You have enlightened me on the many ways to enjoy the lovely nature that surrounds me. I wrote a poem titled Diamonds in the Sky. Looking up I saw all of those things after reading this I will look around me just a little bit more. Very inspiring and thoughtful.

You have captured and painted many beautiful images here Valsa. An enchanting poem indeed.

Another poignant and focused jewel of the Nile, thank you.

What a beautiful idyllic scene you've painted with lovely imagery. Your lines nearly transported me to the place you described. Good poetry always stir our imagination.

In Nature's Bosom- you have vividly depicted Nature in all her finery with keen observation and have presented us an amazing poem for all times., Valsa! Really I can take your poem to be on par with WORDSWORTH and am sure it will find a place in school and college texts for all to remember and recite for the future generation.

Dinesh, Do you mean to say that I should have lived in the cusp between 18th and 19th centuries.... so out dated? Any way, Thanks for the rating awarded!

To Wordsworth nature was a surprise from 1780s to 1820s and the European recession and the impacts of political happenings in France that craved for life of another order remained unknown to the Britons for sometime. England was every where, people there thought. It was a 'relief' of the kind. And now to a Valsa nature holds many more things up her sleeves and one hopes the poet will relentlessly put the latter`s images on the mind till the eve of her life. Let there be another spell of 'relief' for most of us. But.................... but You are to be a very cautious morning walker madam Valsa. Be cautioned further too not to venture into the other side of this nature and close your eyes if she ever steps into your vicinity in any form. I give you a clean 10 out of 10 for the technical perfection and the power of rendering.

a beautiful poem about nature's bosom. nice imagery.

a beautiful poem about nature nice imagery. I like the title

A poem of breadth and depth of structure form and imagery and the resignation of the last two stanzas that all is art and in that beauty is a triumph for an aesthetic mind and the last line fit for Browning and any to Autumn's day.

Lovely imagery here Valsa, a lovely poem.

Flirting with dandy butterflies on iridescent wings Bunches of blooms nestled in the foliage of silken green went with you on this beautiful journey