In My world,
Poverty shan't exist in our world.
Everybody would be treated with equality,
Yet hard work would always be present.
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Yes we all can, probably should, dream. Amazing poem. Just awesome.
Dreams... I love your dreams, dreams that rarely are dreamt now a days. Children dream for video games, a new computer. But you dreams are 10/10. :)
Beautiful, Cassandra, just beautiful! I totally love the note too. Plus, I like the last stanza: But what is My world? It doesn't exist, nor shall it ever occur. Yet one can dream a million miles, So, I say, let them dream. I LOVE dreaming. Good job, girl!
What beautiful thoughts What beautiful feeling Your world certainly is , More than appealing S F
Yes one can dream of a better world, And fight and scream, until you're heard. You're beautiful, idealistic poem makes us conscious of how imperfect our society is and how much there is yet to do.They even want to take away, the little positive we have today.
And thanks for the wise and beautiful note. 'You could be stripped of all your possessions, but never your imagination. If one were to dream, who is to stop them? ' Simply loved it!
Oh how wonderful a poem this is! You have painted a sweet world, ideal for the humankind. The last stanza is simply superb, priceless! 'But what is My world? It doesn't exist, nor shall it ever occur. Yet one can dream a million miles, So, I say, let them dream.' I love to dream!
Your world is ideal.very inspiring poem...awesome lines....
WOoooooooooooow! ....Cassandra? ! ! ! ! ....u did write a poem....this one is unique! really particular dear! im gonna add it to my fave poem list....a perfect piece....that i can find no problem in it....really CHEER! ! ! ! ! ; D
Though some of our ideas may sound a bit Utopian yet we can realize some of them. Enjoyed it.