Sunday, October 9, 2016

In My Universe Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my universe, there is no one to harm me;
Just homeless moons of thought roving inside nebulas
That encompasses light-years of vacuumed illumination
Inhabiting the spectrum in teal and indigo seas
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Susan Williams 16 October 2016

I liked being taken on a journey through the universe- thank you for the guided tour- but now I must return and cook dinner and mop the kitchen floor.... but I will be thinking of the stars birthing somewhere beyond my sight. 10

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Mihaela Pirjol 09 October 2016

I have been taken to a journey into a cosmic dimension... your words propelled me into the depths and heights of a magnificent inner ride...I am still floating...An amazing poem!

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