I built a small hut
In my sandalwood garden..
The wind fell in love with
my sandalwood trees.
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This piece of yours is so fresh. After reading i can feel the fragrance and freshness all around me.
What a beautiful thought sir......Thanks for sharing such great ideas.... very beautifully you have expressed that when our eternal love is with us, we don't need any luxury to survive... it is the love only which becomes our strength, companion, peace and every treasure.....
A beautiful imaginative write that conveys love, peace and happiness. Yes, material things are not always the source of happiness. A great poem with a meaningful message. Well penned.10
As attracted by the sandalwood trees wind comes to visit the sandalwood now and then. He comes to his lady love, the Sandal at night. The owner of the garden enjoys the beauty and sandal perfume remaining in a small hut for which he has nothing to have a mansion. Beautifully inscribed, a great poem.10
Words needed to build strength and faith into our hearts. A garden so peacefully and gracefully.... A great poem indeed.
This poem feels like a breath of fresh air and a warm, gentle breeze. Exquisite.
Breath taking. I felt the winds and sent of the sandalwood. Great love poem!
This is a beautiful love poem. Moreover, it is about true love. I know because I've heard the rustling leaves belonging to the sandalwood trees, those rustling leaves in the breezy night.Voted 10.
Beautifully carved atmosphere, the gentle breeze of love, carrying the aroma of Sandalwood, nice imager...love and peace is experienced more in hut than in a Manson.. Thanks for sharing ++10
Thoughtful and full of life experience. Such poetry is an expression of the simpler things that sometimes escape us in the day to day life. Excellent.
Nicely written poem here Tony about the hut in your sandalwood garden. You get a 10 from me.
Absolutely finely written and with such fragrance one can feel thru every line. Why do I need a mansion? I sleep in my small hut peacefully, breathing always the sandal perfume these lines definitely attracted me and invaluable for me! ! I am glad that I was invited to read this poem. And hence sincere Thanks and regards. A certain 10++! !
Your poem has a wonderful atmosphere of peace and contentment. I could almost smell the wonderful aroma of sandalwood as I read. Judy
Tony, such a heartwarming poem that truly inspires the readers...10+++
Exquisite write, so real and true, simplicty of living enriches our lives in the most meaningful way!
A soft, pleasant yet powerfully emotive write. Very beautifully worded!