Friday, June 29, 2018

In My Sand Fortress Comments

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Life exists in my dream world,
Built beside water world;
Around and around to twirl,
Placed fine candle cones on curls;
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Sphoorthi Padmini Rangarajan
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Dr Antony Theodore 29 June 2018

My love bleeds with every scratcher; Yet long to rebuild the sand fortress, To repaint my love with loving portraits; Wonderful imagination and presentation.. you have a poetic mind....... cultivate it dear poet. tony

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Sphoothi Theatre 29 June 2018

Thanks for reading my poem and also passing on valuable comment. Regards Sphoorthi

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2018

Existence of life in dream world is very perceptive in nature. To repaint your love with loving portraits is an amazing task of course. Wisely penned wonderful poem is shared here...10

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Sphoorthi Theatre 29 June 2018

Dear Kumarmani Mahkul Ji, Thanks for your encouraging words Regards

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