In my pocket I had placed your heart
making sure it didn't fall.
Oh! A fish jumped out of the earth for me,
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Yay! I captured reader's hearts! I think we can all relate to feeling safe when someone loves you.
Thanks so much. I like to see good imagery in poems as well, so it is a gold comment. Beautifully, yes it is.
Beautiful imagery and metaphors.So, it's still in your pocket?
I hope he has my heart too, lol. Thanks for commenting, I tried something new here too
this stinks cat can do better