In My Own World Comments

This is really beautiful. The true feelings of fear make us become indifferent and sometimes rude too but what to do we have so much baggages to make us suffer. Into my favourite

The nature of heart is some how you are not able to make a wall around it, as you mention in last stanza, there is hope to be faced with open doors and find the keys. congratulations for Poem of the Day.

Very beautiful and honest portrayal of the angst of a heart that is afraid of the unknown. Life is never a bed of roses. It has its thorns. we need to be prepared to take pain and joy with equanimity. Linet, a frank expression of emotions well packed into this poem. Wishing you a joyful life ahead.

Through pain and suffering, we learn life's greatest lessons. And the greatest is that love shall conquer fear. Tragically, some men have instilled such great fear in women that they are afraid to love again. Is it worth the gamble? Of course, it is! Excellent write, Linet! Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!

Thank you all for your comments, am humbled.

An original write, so very interesting. Remember life is so short if your heart feels strong then follow it. So much of life is fear and it is incredible to look back and see just what you have passed through your journey. Thank you and good luck.

Sometimes it is hard to let our protective walls down..but if you are lucky it can welcome a world of happiness! One day maybe? ..when the time is right.. A thoughtfully and emotional write, well deserving of selection as Poem of the Day...10

Marvelous writing...We do fear the unknown and often build walls around us to protect from pains and disappointments.

Linet, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

Awesome! Beautiful display of sheer poetic skills that resonate with vibrations of ingenuity. Witty reflections elegantly brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing Linet, .

Nice poem.. Nice stanzas.. I am in my own world, and it is better this way for now. ..says sometimes Yes! ! 10+

A beautifully written poem that I loved.

LAST PART: I am NOT advising you, but your poem invites me to write these words as a response. Thank you for sharing your thoughts and future in this ardent poem. Gorgeous write! A TEN and more CONGRATULATIONS as the Member Poem of The DAY!

In my fatherland they say: IF you are still not ready to face a new friendship with a man, wait a little longer till the right man comes at your door. We have also the right of choice, not only the males.So, think of your age and do you still want a child or not...hihi...

a sad poem of being afraid to get hurt again but such is life no pain no gain? ...............................wonderfully well written Linet

This is a very beautiful poem, The fear of unknown has been spilled in a very style. 'But keep knocking you might find an open door some day Or you might find the keys some day If you do, be the best that you can And if your patience runs out it is still okay.'.. is so nice. Congrats.

Simple words, beautifully crafted. Many congratulations, Linet!

Linet, such a well-penned poem of the day... big congats... a huge 10+++

All new things come with some little anxiety but they turn out good.Go for it girl, no man is an Island.

In my own world! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.