In My Own Hands Comments

The imagry in this poem is AMAZING! There's no hand out the baby slips... that line in particular hit me. I don't exactly know why, but it did. Wonderful write, Leo. And the title is very intreging.[sp? ] Thank you Gabriela

Leo, Your poems are incredible! I chose to comment on this one because of it's unique imagery and descriptive words. You need to continue writing and making more poems because you truly have a great talent! Keep up the good work! -Jess