# # # In My Mind's Eye Comments

dear sonya....mind soars up in love and takes wings to fly.lovely poem, enjoyed reading it..best wishes ritty

Simply beautiful, Sonya..I love your last line

heaven bound steps....wings....simple but very powerful poem...deep love inside it

Exquisite verse about the power of love! I read it over several times. Very enjoyable and well written. Good job!

I like this one Sonya, rythmic and simple, the opening verse makes me start to smile. But the second verse falters, then 'crumbling'...breaks down in sadness. Can you roll it back...pick up the positive thread?

I love the simple language in this. The heaven-bound wings is a colorful image too. 'I take a breath Another step Upon this crumbling patch of earth' it's just perfection.