Thursday, July 30, 2009

In My Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

'in my mind' i have climbed the highest mountain
i have swam the deepest sea.
i have done everything for you to get close to me.
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louis rams
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like a branch you feed from the tree.

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Kranthi Pothineni 01 August 2009

'In My Mind' explains how you see this world. I hope and wish at least on oneday it will be true.

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Heather S 30 July 2009

this thought should be in every ones mind, but its not sadly.this is yet another poem that I think the world should read.I love this poem, thanks again Mr.Louis for the inspiration.10/10 Heather

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Christine Kerr 30 July 2009

I know that this is where life is soppose to be, but the greed and hatred has taken over so much of everthing. I think you've been to heaven and back. 10 again

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