Wednesday, June 10, 2009

In My Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

however much, isay
i love you
it seems not enough!
for enough! will be the day, you say
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ritty patnaik
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Marieta Maglas 11 June 2009

the short sentences plus the easy diction all through embellish this beautiful writen..10++

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Saadat Tahir 10 June 2009

ritty sounds like throwing in the towel is the degeneration of give built into the halo of endearment very provocative lines...well done cheers

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Joseph Poewhit 10 June 2009

Love can be a hurting game

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