Tuesday, April 6, 2010

In My Loneliness Comments

Rating: 5.0

This crying sky shares pain with me
And this dancing tree shares its joy
That tall mountain shares its wealth
And playing ocean shares its breath
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Sheldon Saluta 13 April 2010

i like your poem! it seems we're in lined with one milieu... LONELINESS this poem has a comparison to my poem life in isolation maybe, i could relate to your vehements!

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 10 April 2010

thanks for sharing.... poetic

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Marieta Maglas 08 April 2010

wonderful poem, it is practically an indestructible connection between the human being and the nature...lovely to read 10/10

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The Lost.. 08 April 2010

wonderful one, i really liked it: D loneliness is the hardest feeling ever, i was sufering this feling before, but thanks God i dont feel loneliness now as i used too. sometimes we feel lonelimess even if we have a big family hope u happy life. thanks.

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 08 April 2010

You are with so many things and how come loneliness is present. Solitude might be a more proper word. The poem is a bit abstract and takes time to comprehend.

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Anju Addanki 08 April 2010

wow thats wonderful and i really felt its so true as i feel and go through it? very nice

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Janell Cressman 07 April 2010

Wow, what an awesome poem i like it! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Joseph Poewhit 07 April 2010

Takes all types to make a world, alone is only one state of being. Though with GOD your never alone.

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Eyan Desir 07 April 2010

Good write But sometimes it's better to be alone there are rotten ppl out there... thank u

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Rajaram Ramachandran 06 April 2010

This shows a positive outlook to a solitary person who minds not the place full of negative objects.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 06 April 2010

This shows a positive outlook to a solitary person who minds not the place full of negative objects.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 April 2010

‘…Rotten fruit shares its hope with me…’ This is the most beauteous spot where I’m glued…indeed fantastic…genius …gestate… Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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