Thursday, July 19, 2018

In My Loneliness Comments

Rating: 5.0

You played with barbie
dolls in the backyard
near the peach tree
by the back wall.
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Ravi Kopra
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Kostas Lagos 20 July 2018

The shadow of sorrow, that the loss of a close person casts on our lives, is depicted perfectly here.Thanks for sharing

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Rajnish Manga 20 July 2018

The poem shows the value of an innocent relationship cut short abruptly by Providence. Quite poignant. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 July 2018

Ravi, such a well expressed poem....10++++

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