In My Land And Home Comments

better than anything i can write i like reading poems but i cant write them

A few spelling mistakes but I am sure you of the non tongue am doing so well... Let me disseminate some more... In my land of colourful tan of richness makes more sense if as 'In my land of colourful tan, 'AND', richness' An english baddy as is my ozzy colourful youth.(colourful being my tongue, as is colorful america's) switches are extremes... let them be so... But rather switches OF extremes, or switches feel serene, or 'switches are vereine'(I think personally this fits) ... Vereine - a german noun, a union, association, or society. Fits just nicely. Don't you?

a poem as perfect, perfect could be... you have thousand toungues to talk about your home land, hamid