In the depths of my heart's graveyard
lies a collection of emotions so scarred
each one has attached memory, a story to tell
of life's beautiful, a never-ending carousel.
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A very heart moving poem! .. So very beautifully expressed! .. Ever so many Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++
My hearts graveyard is a reflection of my grace... Very profound! ..
I cite here your two last lines: my emotions may die and fade away my spirit will continue to thrive, day by day.. C'est Magnifique!
Dear Dr. M. Asim Nehal, Congratulations with this philosophical loveliest poem, TOP Marks from my heart, such wiseest words and so thought-provoking, I have enjoyed tremendously,
a beautiful poem touching the hights of emotional maturity and deep insight.
I wrote the poem 'The Heart's Graveyard: Inspires Enlightens Beautiful Lives', inspired by my comment on the poem 'In My Heart's Graveyard', by the poet M. Asim Nehal and dedicated to M. Asim Nehal.
p5 we encounter who share belief, that a better world a better tomorrow may ripple spread from a single beautiful life
p4 may provide clarity to walk a better present, live a life honest humble nurture dreams hopes, in friends family chance souls
p3 to strive to serve community with ability, past experiences memories joy sadness loss sow our hearts graveyard, cultivating a carousal sacred past
p2 for endurance future success, betrayal treachery which sows lessons caution beware wisdom, pain loss which can teach suffering empathy humanity, may motivate strengthen a soul
p1when walking through the heart's graveyard, will we reflect upon success which may not be final, regret which may be mournful melancholy, failure which may sow learns
That's a beautiful way of expressing something I have noticed. As time passes, we are less likely to be swept away by basic emotions. Instead, like Marcus Aurelius we find pleasure in detachment and reflection on emotions.
The memories we gathered in life's journey affect who we are. A beautiful poem so well expressed.
Gem of a poem by you. In fact I was thinking about heart in a different way and you gave a new prespective to it.
Sorrow. beauty. wisdom and hope! .. An ever so inspiring poem! ..++++++++++++++++++++++