Saturday, January 13, 2024

In My Heart's Graveyard Comments

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In the depths of my heart's graveyard
lies a collection of emotions so scarred
each one has attached memory, a story to tell
of life's beautiful, a never-ending carousel.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Rebecca Navarre 14 January 2024

Sorrow. beauty. wisdom and hope! .. An ever so inspiring poem! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 14 January 2024

A very heart moving poem! .. So very beautifully expressed! .. Ever so many Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 14 January 2024

My hearts graveyard is a reflection of my grace... Very profound! ..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 January 2024

I cite here your two last lines: my emotions may die and fade away my spirit will continue to thrive, day by day.. C'est Magnifique!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 January 2024

Dear Dr. M. Asim Nehal, Congratulations with this philosophical loveliest poem, TOP Marks from my heart, such wiseest words and so thought-provoking, I have enjoyed tremendously,

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Zumas Millamo 13 January 2024

Creative poem. Nicely written.

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Savita Tyagi 13 January 2024

a beautiful poem touching the hights of emotional maturity and deep insight.

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Terence Craddock 13 January 2024

I wrote the poem 'The Heart's Graveyard: Inspires Enlightens Beautiful Lives', inspired by my comment on the poem 'In My Heart's Graveyard', by the poet M. Asim Nehal and dedicated to M. Asim Nehal.

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Terence Craddock 13 January 2024

p5 we encounter who share belief, that a better world a better tomorrow may ripple spread from a single beautiful life

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Terence Craddock 13 January 2024

p4 may provide clarity to walk a better present, live a life honest humble nurture dreams hopes, in friends family chance souls

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Terence Craddock 13 January 2024

p3 to strive to serve community with ability, past experiences memories joy sadness loss sow our hearts graveyard, cultivating a carousal sacred past

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Terence Craddock 13 January 2024

p2 for endurance future success, betrayal treachery which sows lessons caution beware wisdom, pain loss which can teach suffering empathy humanity, may motivate strengthen a soul

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Terence Craddock 13 January 2024

p1when walking through the heart's graveyard, will we reflect upon success which may not be final, regret which may be mournful melancholy, failure which may sow learns

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Denis Mair 13 January 2024

That's a beautiful way of expressing something I have noticed. As time passes, we are less likely to be swept away by basic emotions. Instead, like Marcus Aurelius we find pleasure in detachment and reflection on emotions.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 January 2024

The memories we gathered in life's journey affect who we are. A beautiful poem so well expressed.

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Poetic Sky 13 January 2024

Gem of a poem by you. In fact I was thinking about heart in a different way and you gave a new prespective to it.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 13 January 2024

Brilliant ending, I loved it. Too good a poem.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 13 January 2024

Bravo! ! ! Enjoyed it very much

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Anjandev Roy 13 January 2024

Wonderful piece...as always..... thank u, my friend...

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M. Asim Nehal

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