In My He@rt - Forever Comments
The sound of your footsteps was the sweetest music to my ears,
you always managed to make me smile through my tears.
Just the sound of your name was enough to make my heart leap,
I loved to stay awake every night, just to watch you sleep.
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Woohhhh… what a love! It’s well-written! The emotions were well expressed. I’d loved the way you wrote it… though, I knew, one day soon… your door will again open another love after another… if the person in the poem has already left to heaven… for sure, he/she will never gonna let you be alone and give you another company. Though, it will not mean that you will just forget him/her… neither you love that love the less.
Woohhhh… what a love! It’s well-written! The emotions were well expressed. I’d loved the way you wrote it… though, I knew, one day soon… your door will again open another love after another… if the person in the poem has already left to heaven… for sure, he/she will never gonna let you be alone and give you another company. Though, it will not mean that you will just forget him/her… neither you love that love the less.
a very long one... good it's not tiring because i think that it's beautiful
lines made ma heart miss a beat...nice to read a touchin poem aftr a long gap...........I'm not gonna cry, not even a single tear, cuz i know you're still with me here '.......thse lines wre so good......loved t
I salute your poetic skill. You are a born poetess and after the exams you are once again in your natural poetic love colors. CP
The spirit of true love is well-depicted. In line 11, it should be 'wedding' and not 'weeding' ring, is it not?
strong feellings wonderfully expressing a deep wound which i hope heals very soon well done my friend
strong feellings wonderfully expressing a deep wound which i hope heals very soon well done my friend
again a lovely romantic and sweet way written poem..meaningful and soul feeling one.. loved the idea you expressed here..wonderful..10/10
Tanvi that is wonderful, your such a little gem....what rubbish that Braja speaks without emotion, (too much what is he talking about?) you could not call you self a poet...I loved it...Allie..Keep writing girl you're great! ! ! !
Beautiful.... fly fly high in the sky.. don't control your hearty flow...Brave heart is better than a controlled brain... carry on your good work.. nice reading! !
A nice love poem but too much emotional which is harmful for a good poet.There should be some control of over emotion for poetic value..Thanks
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7/21/2025 10:48:34 AM # 1.0.0
A lovely work that flows well and invites the reader to share your emotions rather than thrusting upon them.