Heavy and deep as the clocks do their ticks
Slowly-by, the dreamchathers tricks-
I fell into a deep-haunted sleep
your heart was the one i tried to keep
                
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Aw..Sad...Anyway, I enjoyed it! I love the concept of your piece.

 
                     
                
beautifully written! a sad story is best described poetically. his leaving has made you dying with the broken heart. and the images of the man just couldn't stop swimming into view. I can totally picture the scenes. This is one nice piece. Thank you for writing! :)