Wednesday, November 18, 2009

In My Haunted Dreams Comments

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Heavy and deep as the clocks do their ticks
Slowly-by, the dreamchathers tricks-
I fell into a deep-haunted sleep
your heart was the one i tried to keep
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Medusa Waves
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Sabrina Jubahar 18 November 2009

beautifully written! a sad story is best described poetically. his leaving has made you dying with the broken heart. and the images of the man just couldn't stop swimming into view. I can totally picture the scenes. This is one nice piece. Thank you for writing! :)

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Donna Lou Resurreccion 18 November 2009

Aw..Sad...Anyway, I enjoyed it! I love the concept of your piece.

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