Monday, June 27, 2011

' In My Father's Shoes ' Comments

Rating: 2.9

The lamp of the bright life had darkened.
When my father life was taken by God.
It was the darkest moment ever
experienced by my mother and family.
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Aniruddha Pathak 15 March 2020

Thank you Jez Burl for introducing me to this heart-feeling poem, of a good poet with even better heart. And I loved some expressions in the poem.

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A B Faniki 16 September 2019

An image worth a thousand joy. For the deed done by thy. Thanks for sharing a piece of u with us

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Bharati Nayak 18 June 2016

Stepping into your fathers's shoes and taking care of your mother and younger siblings at a young age barely out of college shows your loving and caring heart.Even when you have discharged your responsibilities you still carry forward that good work by caring for your society.Thanks for sharing a lovely poem..

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Madhabi Banerjee 25 May 2016

nice written.keep writing.and share us.

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Kim Barney 01 March 2016

I like this poem so much I had to come back and read it again.

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Genful Sorebell 24 June 2015

wonderful poem a hearttouching one

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 26 April 2015

the last stanza has impressed me a lot..Those who know the pleasure hidden in the sacrifices, may understand...Keep up with your good work...

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Kim Barney 26 April 2015

Tugs at my heartstrings, does this poem. Thanks for sharing, and congratulations on having it chosen as poem of the day!

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Savita Tyagi 26 April 2015

Heart touching. Blessed is the mother and family to have such loving and caring support.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 26 April 2015

Touching poem indeed.

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Kelly Kurt 26 April 2015

A heartfelt poem, Ency. Thanks for sharing. Peace

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Paul Reed 04 July 2014

To take the shoes off? Nay...how true, this resonates with all caring sons

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