Monday, April 9, 2012

In My Eyes Comments

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every day i look at the fear in other peoples eyes
none of them can come close to mine
fearing that every day my family might lose a life
knowing that i must survive
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Derrick Gwynn
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Shania K. Younce 18 March 2014

This poem has a good flow. Bien!

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Tiana Webb 25 April 2012

This poem makes me so sad but it also makes me realise the truth in it. Life will always have its ups and downs but we have to remember to never give up. That's what I get from this poem! !

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Derrick Gwynn

Derrick Gwynn

Vernon CT.
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