In My Dreams Comments
Animals would live happily in the wild,
Flowers would dance,
And the wind will play ing my hair,
In my dreams
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You have successfully described your wonderful dreams, in that, we all saw your dreams as we read the poem. Well done! 'And my hair, twisted elegantly in a braid.' - I liked this! 'My violin, shining in the moonlight; the notes dancing superbly off the string, In my dreams' - This is so beautiful, so imaginative! 'But I have cofidence, That one day, my dreams will be true.' - So be it, my dear poet!
What a lovely dream GB! It would be fantastic if we could all dream of flowers dancing and wind playing in our hair. I really loved the verse, 'My violin, shining in the moonlight; the notes dancing superbly off the string, In my dreams.' Just beautiful.
, , its good that you dream good, , , i am sick of my wierd dreams that makes no sense, , , , nice write, , keep penning, ,
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7/19/2025 9:47:12 PM # 1.0.0
A very elegant write. It is a beautiful poem. Bien!