In My Dreams Comments

A lovely romantic piece, consuming with deepest emotions and thoughts. Well done.

Very lovely and sweeet kept it up 10+++

Well expressed It's nice to see in your pains there a soft spot of love 10s

dreams are only a inch away it only comes to us if we chase after it.

Hi Lee - another emotive poem another example of perfect FREE VERSE - it just flows and flows and flows like you experiences of love - 'Let your love flow like a mountain stream..................! 'I have a dream - that one day...............' 'We will meet up again' enjoy the sand - the sea - the kisses - your special touch 'Softer than the clouds melt across the sky' - Awesome! 'I have a dream......... ' You are the 'Perfect thief to steal my breath away' such beautiful language needs neither metre or rhyme to embellish it it is 'Free as Love'. Do we ever really meet up outside our dreams? Perhaps but in reality only 'For us to slip away and STAY IN OUR DREAM! '. This poem leaves me breathless - it is a little masterpiece. I scoe it 10 x 10 x 10. Keep dreaming keep sharing all your dreams in your lovely peotry. Love in poetry - JOHN.

lovely and romantic dream, well write dear lee

I love the metaphor of the rose, this was splendid to read. Very consuming with emotion