Sunday, November 30, 2008

In My Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are many good things
There are many mutts
Whatever you want
Whatever you hunt
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Yasser Koor
COMMENTS

Wow, the simple lines and message of the 'good things' and 'can never be broken' is a wonderfully expressed in this poem. The powerful title delivers the poem, especially how it carries throught it without so many words. The last stanza is written beautifully and the underlying message is lightly touched in your simplistic style. Nicely done.

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Anjali Sinha 12 December 2008

nice write yasser keep your dreams alive ++++++10 love anju

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Salu Salu 03 December 2008

dreams bring us passion which has match beyond earthly feelings. rgrds/salu

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 02 December 2008

Imagine Yasser when you enjoy dreams so much than how luschivious the reality will be. Best enjoyment is shared. A neat poem.

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Maram Alaa 01 December 2008

Anyone can escape into sleep, we are all geniuses when we dream....

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Egi David Perdana 01 December 2008

nice poems friends very beautiful

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sara }i{ 01 December 2008

it's so nice but u must open ur eyes and after ur dreams nice work :)

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Blue Eyes 01 December 2008

thanks for the flattery, i think of my self as a low rank semi poet anyway, about ur poem i think this poem is a really good one.it has wisdom in it great work.

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Shimon Weinroth 30 November 2008

well done keep smiling

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