Monday, October 19, 2015

In My Dreams (2) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Even when you are not by my side,
Within my dreams you seem to hide.
I saw you last night as I slept –
Dreams like these I wish could be kept.
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Angela Wybrow
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 19 October 2015

Within the dream I was so immersed, But when I awoke the bubble burst. Consciousness had called – the dream had ended, And over me a sense of disappointment descended. Verily a good description

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 October 2015

Beautiful dream that should be appreciated. Since dreams are bound to come to an end, should not be allowed to disappoint to the dreamer by himself. Nice poem and rhyme. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Angela Wybrow

Angela Wybrow

Salisbury, Wilts, UK
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