Last night, you were in my dreams.
We were on the bridge overlooking the river.
The wind was entangled in your hair
And your eyes held the fading sunlight.
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WOW.... made me just fall deeply into the words, its a lovely expression of the feelings that come with falling in love. Really romantic imagery. I have no criticisms sorry but when im always honest with my feedback so when u get compliments they will be what i genuinly think. :) really enjoyed reading this
This, is breathtaking if this is how you think, pass your thoughts on to the sterotypical guy! Man this is brilliant. it made me tear up a little bit, its very very good. Makes me wish i was this good as a poet!