Thursday, February 14, 2008

{in My Dreams} Comments

Rating: 5.0

My heart beats with fervour
When my love, we are as one
Your tenderness impressed
Eternal etchings on my soul
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Lillian Jamison
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Emma Woods 01 September 2008

this poem bought tears to my eyes and made e smile so much ir's beautiful! !

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Meggie Gultiano 27 February 2008

a beautiful piece..lovely flow of words...i love this

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Original Unknown Girl 15 February 2008

Beautiful poem of longing and love, expressed perfectly. HG: -) xx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 14 February 2008

A, warm, comely, and tightly wrapped work, my dear. A paradigm for a Valentine curtain closer. ~ ~ ~

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Thad Wilk 14 February 2008

Hi Lillian! ! Beautiful poem, love it! Thanks for sharing! ! ! ! *10*! ! Best wishes, Friend Thad

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Marvin Brato 14 February 2008

A beautiful dream painted in poetry, I loved it! Its kind of longing that most women and even men are drawn when in love! Thanks for sharing, a 10.

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