Saturday, August 22, 2020

In My Dreams-❤️ Comments

Rating: 5.0

You sing a lullaby for me,
I shall dream about you
On the silvery moonbeams
Falling through cotton candy of translucent sky
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M. Asim Nehal
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Indira Renganathan 10 March 2024

Full of love....lovely love poem....liked

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 November 2022

Asim I really just love it

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Beautiful poem. The aurora of the glory of life is enchanting. Top score, sir

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 November 2022

Wonderful Poem Asim ji.' Let us swim into the sea of love ' Thank you so much dear Poet. So glad to see you back in PH after a while.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 25 June 2021

Fantastic dream. Nice work.

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M.J. Lemon 11 May 2021

A fabulous dream and a great reminder that at times dreams do come true. Magnificent, Asim.

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Gordon Walter 22 October 2020

Awesome imagery and picture.5* From the galley of past We shall see the future smiling On the lunar luminescence of glory At the purple arched sky Where eyes turn to a kaleidoscope

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Gordon Walter 22 October 2020

Awesome imagery and picture. From the galley of past We shall see the future smiling On the lunar luminescence of glory At the purple arched sky Where eyes turn to a kaleidoscope

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S H 30 August 2020

Nicely composed poem. From the galley of past We shall see the future smiling On the lunar luminescence of glory At the purple arched sky Where eyes turn to a kaleidoscope

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Kiran lekhi 28 August 2020

All good things happens in deams let it come true. Nice poem Sir.

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Shreya Hacks 25 August 2020

Yes dreams never ends Before the dawn breaks the clouds And birds sing aloud And Sun starts crimson journey Darkness of Edenic Earth vanishes Let us swim in the sea of Love.

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Bwangwa Yukoshu 25 August 2020

I seldom gets the dream they are elusive of me. Please come to me and show some rosy things. Like you show it to poets.

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Obaid Ali 24 August 2020

Dreams are pure and perfect. They are close to realities but not real Words usage made it more fascinating. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.

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T Rajan Evol 24 August 2020

Thoughtful lind: From the galley of past We shall see the future smiling On the lunar luminescence of glory At the purple arched sky Where eyes turn to a kaleidoscope

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 August 2020

Let us swim in the sea of love! Asim ji! What a beautiful poem. I love this dream. May this dream come true.......10

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M Asim Nehal 23 August 2020

Thanks to one and all for your lovely comments.

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Jasmine Shayma 23 August 2020

Wow wow wow so well thought out. Loved this dream.

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Deepak S S 23 August 2020

What a finish to a fantastic dream: Before the dawn breaks the clouds And birds sing aloud And Sun starts crimson journey Darkness of Edenic earth vanishes Let us swim in the sea of Love.

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Rajnish Manga 23 August 2020

The poem is remarkable for so many things- its brilliant portrayal of love, fascinating images of nature and a flourish of similes and metaphors which elevate this presentation to great heights. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed reading this poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 August 2020

A wonderfully penned piece. Truly impressive....10+++

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