I want a simple life with you
And i won't ask for anything more
You're all i need and a life ahead with you
To love you, to cherish you and to care for you!
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OH please ignore my first note earlier, It should be, this poem was featured as Poem of the Day.
Thank you sooo much my dear colleague, my dear Poets for voting for my poem to be the poem of the day! Richard Wlodarski, Siddartha Montik, Kevin Patrick, Christina Simmons, Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black, Gladys Brown Prince, Unnikrishnan E S, Jayatissa K. Liyanage, Edward Kofi Louis, Indira Renganathan, Clarence Prince, Anil Kumar Panda, Tom Allport, Lucas Cousin Tuka, Linet Sabastian, Col Muhamad Khalid Khan, thank you sooooo much
Thank you sooo much my dear colleague, my dear Poets for voting for my poem to be the poem of the day!
We will always be young and in bloom. Love that line. The simplicity of the poem makes it sound like young love. However, there is a lot more to it than meets the eye. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!
So Simply. expressed TRUE love...in perfect and delicate words! ! ! thanks for this piece poet! !
Sweetly delectable ode to the one that fills your heart with love. Its wonderful to have someone fill your dreams with hope and delight. Congratulations for poem of the day, perfect for Valentines month!
I'm afraid I don't like this poem: I'm aware it's a dreamer's dream but it kept bringing up codependency. Perhaps we all suffer from the bug? ? ? Congrat being aired for the day! ! !
Lovely poem about the simple life but the most important factor is still love and devotion.. a ten..
Hi Eden, Congrats for Poet of the Day. Lovely poem, on the pleasure of dedicating one's life entire for the happiness of others.
To dedicate oneself to the other, an essence in love. Well expressed hearty thoughts wonderfully penned. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X
That is the nature of love to submit oneself to the other...good poem indeed- 10
How nice? To be ever mindful of one we love! Thanks for sharing!
Deeply emotional love is flowing freely in lines. Our life ahead will be pink and fruitful We will always be young and in bloom.. is very nice Congrats.
Mrs Edeen Panotes, i cherish your write up so much, and i believe God has been the source of your inspiration.I understood something deep concerning love in this poem titled IN MY DREAM, In every genuine love, wherver a lover may be let the name and picture of his or her lover always be in both heart and also reflect in your hearts at all time, Mrs Eden Panotes, i wish you more inspiration to compose more inspired poem, thanks.
mrs edeen panotes, i cherish your poem so much, God gave you the divine insigth to make it known to every genuine lovers to know their resposibilities to each other...in life a man need to be content with what he has, ....in a truthfull relationship, wherever you are let the name and picture of your love one always be in your heart and also reflect in your mind at all time...mrs Eden i wish you more inspiration in jesus name.
I want a simple life with you And i won't ask for anything more You're all i need and a life ahead with you To love you, to cherish you and to care for you! love is the greatest need of a human being. your simplicity is praiseworthy. tony