in my dream...
you showed me your gentleness
you comforted me with kindness
gave everything that am dreaming of....
in my dream....
i wished you to hold me
i wished you to touch my lips
and lying safe in your arms...
in my dreams...
there is only you and me
you and me...... only....you and me...
good poem. Lovely. Could be improved ah man now all of u dn't go mad at me okay the poem is flawless happy. Yeah i am arrogant blinded by ignorance but yet I pleade like a begar it is but the hard truth i speak and i succumb to taunts. Flawless poem really.
saw you as you created me there into that dream.. saw you in front of my eyes.. gave you all what you desired for.. lovely sweet poetic dream.. thx for sharing.. hazem al..
Dear Lady Grace, Obsession and constant dreaming about the same person is nothing more than a true love translation, there is nothing wrong with that since God gave the power and the courage to do that...We all go through similar experience in different ways, but, nevertheless, love is shown to be a fact, one more time through you, great work, as usual, you got my vote, too,10+. keep the good work, Love and Peace, Romeo
A heart throbing poem.......wonderful real looking dream can be a vista of life.....your words flow very smoothly.....keep on with your gifted art.
Wonderful romantic poem. Well penned Very touching too. Enjoyed reading it 10+
I felt as if I already read this Good write Grace... Be a good woman
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
what were we doing in the dream? ? ? wonderfully intimate piece lady grace.