Thursday, July 27, 2006

In Mind, In Pen Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I saw the film 'Laurence of Arabia'
I wrote a poem about the deserts.
If I saw a program over cooking,
I would write a poem about Desserts.
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David Darbyshire
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Patricia Gale 27 July 2006

Inspired my things seem to accomplish the words that flow. A creation within itself.

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Scarlet Red 27 July 2006

write about food? ! care? ! love? ! that will nourish them.... nice creation david =)

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Francesca Johnson 27 July 2006

Regarding the last two lines - Swollen childrens' bellies? Misery? Sad mothers? Poverty? Dirty drinking water? Corrupt governments? This is a thought-provoking poem, Dave. Love, Fran xx

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