Thursday, July 1, 2010

*in Miasma Of Love Comments

Rating: 2.9

If these tear drops are futile
Failed to give you signs and clues
Of the passing days and nights
And stormy weathered blues
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Catrina Heart
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Eyan Desir 09 July 2010

Awwww so sad You ar so versatile  I guess it makes you a great writer..... a well written collab....

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 July 2010

‘I shall give you goodbye but please/Don't think my heart belongs to someone else’…exalted love doesn’t accept jilt…’woefully yours’ poetry ….passion packed but to a ‘NO’ beloved… Thanks sharing… Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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David Beckham 01 July 2010

When you meet people the first time, they are so very sensitive to you, but somewhere towards the death of the relationship, the time invested in the relationship blinds us from seeing the difference between how things were in the beggining and how things are now. Thats why I love this poem because it just in a quick few words, brings us back to reality. If you dont love me, then maybe its time for me to move on, heaven knows I did my best! This is a wonderful piece. Good job

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