In Memory Of A Teenage Love... Comments
There’s a radiant city that never sleeps,
Where random people seek survival,
It alters destinies, but also keeps
Piles of dreams and faith in revival
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this second poem from you, which i've just read, is a delight. i was afraid i might be disappointed after reading the first one (about halloween) which i was very pleased with. it is so nice to find a poet who doesn't make a mistake with it's and its. it's refreshing! and i thought of NYC as soon as i read lady made of copper. i've been to the city a few times and always had a nice/interesting experience. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - my favorite lines: When winter tales are told in storm ........ warm/storm and other rhymes are most welcome AND After dusk, the lights are on, Thus, even poor areas don’t seem so gritty, ............exactly, but i still would be reluctant to walk those areas at night! thanks for sharing. bri :)
Thanks a lot once again. I honestly envy you for having been to NYC. I never have. As the title says, it was a teenage dream of mine which I wanted to visit very badly. It faded away over time because of certain circumstances but it's still somewhere in there nevertheless. I hope to make it come true one day, until I'm still here.
I love your description of The Statue Of Liberty. A lovely piece of poetry. Keep it up and thanks for sharing.
I've never seen it but that's how I picture it. Thanks for the comment :)
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7/24/2025 6:41:25 PM # 1.0.0
it is a delight to read your poem. narrating all that you see and experience in a poetic way. your observation is very powerful. thank you very much