Monday, August 25, 2008

In Memory - Always! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh she was so beautiful
big black eyes
slim slender fragile body
her moves were so intoxicating
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Deepti Agarwal
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Richa Dhodi 08 October 2008

That was a lovely slab. i liked it. :) a lot

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Jyoti Saxena 30 August 2008

that was cute----the discribtion so vivid!

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Kesav Easwaran 29 August 2008

a poem for your fish, once beloved and now dead... that is a real poetic mind there...nicely wrtten, deepti 10

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C T Heart 25 August 2008

In the memory of your beloved fish.......lovely written.

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